UPDATE AND APOLOGY TO READERS PLEASE READ!!

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UPDATE AND APOLOGY TO READERS PLEASE READ!!

Quick update: currently as of Thursday august 1st 2013 at 7:14 am I would like to inform my readers that I will be rewriting chapters 2 and 3. they will be much more detailed and longer there are also scenes in there that will be important to the story later on. the chapters should be finished by the end of today at most, but will most likely be released earlier. chapter four will be written soon after words and posted as well. I would also like to apologize for the quality of my work they have not been even up to even my standards as one of my first stories ever written I preceded to get to excited when I started getting messages and pm's about how good they thought it was. I was excited and wanted to write and publish the next chapter for the people who complemented me, but I was to excited and rushed not taking my time and giving it my all. I deeply apologize to anybody who disliked the rushed chapters 2 and 3. I ask if you read this to please give it another shot and I deeply apologize for my childishness and not giving it my all for you readers. I wish to thank you all for reading my work and I hope that when I finish the series that you will still be sticking with me all the way through till the end. I felt apologizing directly to you readers would be the most mature and the best way to make up for my mistake please forgive me for getting big headed. Please continue to send your support and help through pm's and comments I promise to give it my all thank you sincerely KingCerberus.

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